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The glass teardrop by ~batbear:iconbatbear:



I saw it in a shop, I barely remember what I was doing there now. It was one of those shops full of useless odds and ends, knick-knacks, good-looking junk. I think I was shopping for an aunt, letting my gaze sweep across the tacky wares in the hope of spotting something inspirational. There it was, in a crowded display cabinet in the back corner of the shop. A glass teardrop.

It wasn't one of those cheap pieces of glass on string, nor a faceted crystal teardrop. It was suspended inside another block of glass somehow, with other shafts and angles intercepting it, but not splitting it or spoiling it. I stared at it for countless minutes trying to work out if it was glass and air, cracked glass, sheets of glass or some other clever technique. The light poured around it, bright and dark, but it still stood alone in the centre of its block.

I must have stared at it for too long, because the little old lady who worked behind the counter appeared at my side and asked if she could help me. I asked the price, I've no idea why now. I knew I would buy it.

When I returned home, I scoured the house for the perfect spot to put it. My desk, the coffee table, the bedside dresser. None of it looked right, it was all too commonplace. That's when I remembered the little corner shelf high up in the dining room, the one that was only noticeable just before sunset when the dying sun shafted into the corner for all of an hour before setting.

I waited until it was sunset for that reason, a foolish and romantic attempt at a sense of occasion. I clambered up onto a wobbly chair and went to wipe the dust off the shelf with my sweater sleeve. There was a picture frame in the way, lying face down in the grubby grey dirt. I put the glass teardrop down on the dusty shelf and picked up the photograph with a sinking sense of certainty. There you were, laughing, covered in snow from a snow fight and bundled up in layers of winter clothes. You hated that picture, that's why it was in the far corner, but I loved it. You were so alive. The sun lit up the glass teardrop unnoticed and passed away below the horizon. A single teardrop fell from my jaw onto the picture. A real teardrop on the glass, flat, fleeting, broken and imperfect, but real.

I nearly took the glass teardrop back to the shop that weekend, but I didn't want to disappoint the old lady. Besides, some of them have an odd glint in their eye that unnerves me. Instead, I wrapped it up and sent it to my aunt for her birthday. I hope she likes it.
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This one spilled out of my pen one day.

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:iconstrange-normality:
Lovely piece of writing, really descriptive, and intriguing.

Happy New year! :)
:iconbatbear:
Thank you, and you!
:iconlady-roux:
Very intriguing and it flows really well :)
:iconlivingcomforteagle:
it really pulls you in when the character talks about the photograph - and suddenly, we're not talking about a glass teardrop, but so much more.

=) lovely.

--
dark pictures, thrones, the stones that pilgrims kiss,
poems that take a thousand years to die;
but ape the immortality of this
red label on a little butterfly.
-vladimir nabokov
:iconbatbear:
Thank you very much.
:iconbuchi:
wow...really amazing piece! that one really appeals to me. i liked the sudden turn of thoughts, and how the glass teardrop turns into a tear on glass. :)

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Better a cold truth than a warm lie.
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:iconbeautelle:
that is beautiful work!! how did you come up with such an image of the teardrop? did you see something like that or did your mind create it? that is a wonderful wonderful description and i shall fave this just for that!

terrific 'twist' too!! the ';perfect' tear finding the lost and forgotten memory, producing the most perfect tear.

sending it on... it's almost like pay it forward. you know that movie? mmm ^_^ beautiful work!

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~ * I never have a bad day. If I begin having one, I try to do everything within my power to turn it good!
:iconmymidnightlove:
Oh wow, that really had a lot of emotion in it. I love how something like one seemingly ugly photograph can change his view about the glass teardrop so quickly. Really incredible piece, no wonder you got featured!

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"Hopelessly, I'll love you Endlessly."
~'Endlessly' Muse
:iconwerewolf-me:
I really like this :)

It seems very real and believable...

I love the paragraph with the real tear, the emotion...

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- It's always reality that's got it wrong...
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